I personally thought the film was good from a storyline perspective, it had humour, pretty cool music, and didn't have a lot of the problems that beginning animators normaly have.The introduction set it up to be really epic.
However it did have lots of OTHER problems beginners have, such as:Set bumps. The set jiggled lots because you touched the camera or whatever the camera was sitting on as you moved the minifigure or took the picture.
Sound acting: As far as i could hear, you were the only voice actor in the film, and i made it difficult to tell when different people were talking.
I can't complain TOO much about the "ship", as it made me think of The mMagic Portal, which was epic because it was the pioneer brickfilm.It was sort of bland but it fit well with the rest of the film.
For some of your shots (not the last one where they were frozen) you could tell that you were playing the same frame over and over again, instead of taking a new pic. Trust me, it looks better if you take several pictures for all scenes, evevn if no one is moving. The exception is your last shot, it would have looked odd if you did that.
I didn't quite get the bit where most of em where sleeping or something except for two, perhaps they had gone back to base and were being lazybums?
Red classic.
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