I like the idea, but the text on the frame is WAY too small. But it sounds cool anyway!

Oh, okay. Anyway, good luck!

Aww yeah, great to see the thread up.
If you want to, I can make a poster for this movie with photoshop.
Just send me an image of the ballet dancer, both versions.

This is the same plot as Black Swan. I'm not saying you intentionally copied it, it's just it's practically the same exact thing. In Black Swan, Natalie Portman plays Nina - a dancer who basically goes nuts from multiple underlying causes such as her crazy mother and a new member of the studio who Nina perceives to be as a threat and SPOILER kills her (not really, but in her dreamworld she does, but in reality she killed herself because as her dance instructor said the only thing standing in her way is herself.)

Anyways, your plot is pretty much the same thing, psycho dancer, top role in a production, goes nuts.

Just change it up a bit, don't take it too hard. Just try and think of something that hasn't been done before, and Black Swan wasn't all too original either, it's pretty much a more perverted interpretation of The Red Shoes.

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It was nominated for 5 Academy Awards and won one for Natalie Portman in the Best Actress category. It was considered among one of the greatest movies of 2010 by the American Film Institute and contains a lezzy romance scene between Mila Kunis and Natalie Portman.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5jaI1XOB-bs There's the trailer.

I'm not saying you got it from Black Swan, but that isn't the point, the basic plots are very similar, yes there are SOME details that are different, but they're still practically the same. And in the film, Mila Kunis is portrayed as an evil being to Natalie Portman, who believes Mila is out to get her, and drives her over the edge. Like I said, details are not exact, but the plots are pretty similar.

So it seems like the protagonist has dissociative identity disorder which makes her at times antagonist. That's cool.
If you haven't heard about Black Swan you must be living in a cave though...   No offense, it's just a joke but it's certainly a movie you should know oh and I think the plot is good but I think that who killed all the victims shouldn't be revealed until the end of the film because with the plot you described right now the viewer already knows who's killing the other dancers and the only intriguing thing left will be whether someone finds out the truth or not which also is pretty obvious because if nobody figures out who's the killer there will be no culmination in the movie.

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I'm not playing any card. I seriously had no idea what Black Swan was about. It's kind of hard to explain the idea through words. It's kind of like The Mirror as opposed to the reflection, not the story. heres the concept video I made that made me expand. http://www.bricksinmotion.com/forums/to … ept-video/

Hey KinzCove.. not to be rude or against your opinion.. You do have a point about being original.. But see it this way.. These guys are having fun with what their are doing and if they come up with a story them self that is almost similar to what the cinema all ready has to offer then that's all fine and we can only respect that. As long they go and make the movie, have fun and learn from it then that's all great.. We all have to start somewhere.. I started with turning games in to brickfilms and nobody told me I wasn't original, we all deserve a chance and perhaps new things will develop along the process.