Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
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I know i dont rly visit here too often but i just finished this film & submitted to sxsw & im really proud about it so watch it if u want
directors cut
sxsw cut (shorter)
Let me be the first to say, WE MISS YOU. Please come and visit more often.
Secondly. The movie. I watched the shorter one. I don't know what SXSW is but I hope you do well. I think you were trying to be edgy/artsy, but the tops of the heads were really cut off in the first scene. I know that a character's entire head doesn't have to be seen and it's good to conceal a bit, but it seems too extreme.
I liked the idea of the phantom candidate. The girl with a mohawk got a bit laughy at the end of the scene where she said "You never even met her". A bit Seinfeld-y. Besides these couple of picky anaysis, I really enjoyed this, loved the subtlety of the humor, and hope you keep directing/ producing stuff like this.
ooh thanks 4 the comments!! i miss yall too but im pretty busy and i dont really brickfilms much anymore which is mostly why i dont stop by here at all rly :\
anyway yeah!!i guess technically the 1st scene is a medium close up shot but its not gr8 u are right about that especially because the actors are standing at different distances from the camera which is annoying hhah also yeah i noticed that ali started laughing and i cut the shot where i did because after that she actually started laughing which was ok i guess hah i could have reshot it but i didnt want to also because i was trying to do something like this film I made earlier this year where i tried to get the person to laugh on purpose but it didnt work as well.
also sxsw is this huge festival in austin which is a film festival and like technology expo and also a lot of bands play music there and its really fun and last year my bff won a contest there and its fun and maybe if my band gets better.. nah omg but you should get Tinnitis to play at south by its really fun
Hey, thanks for the info on SXSW. It's hard for me to travel any great distance because of my children but maybe one day. I actually may be doing my 1st show in a year, my friend's Christmas Party, and he wants Tinnitis to play.
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