Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
A place to discuss, share, and create stop motion films.
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Hi Everyone
I’m a new member looking for my new video to get critiqued on various levels. Being my first brickfilm I would like to gather as much good / bad feedback as possible to enhance my future works.
If you’ve got a few free minutes to review, your response will be much appreciated.
Thank you
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This is quite a good first brickfilm. Animation looks good and I like the light coming through the clear bricks in the wall behind. My biggest criticism is that there appear to be some frames playing in the wrong order, such as in the first movement when the Stormtrooper appears to jolt back and forward before leaning back as intended. I'd recommend trying to find whatever is causing this to happen.
Thank you sillypenta . I belive the ' jolting ' was because of frames ( between sequences ) being removed after filming.
For whatever reason ( ex. bad focus ) the frames were removed to keep the the video consistent but resulted with ' jolts '
Will note it for my next work
Appreciate your feedback.
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