Topic: Upcoming horror brickfilm WIP

here is the opening shot for an animation I'm working on:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hUb-LzYyFi8

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Re: Upcoming horror brickfilm WIP

wooooooow aterrador!! very good animation and sound effects  mini/shifty

Re: Upcoming horror brickfilm WIP

Looks really nice! I like the use of sound effects and the set design.

Only thing I can critique is the focus pull, it is a bit too fast and makes the film sort of jump almost like a jump cut though there isn't one. I'd try and elongate the pull focus to a length that matches the speed of the zooming out.

Since there is a lot of footage to work with you could easily use a blur visual effect to do this, that is if you want to, but that is just my opinion.

Look forward to seeing more!:)

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Re: Upcoming horror brickfilm WIP

The Tenacious Brick wrote:

Looks really nice! I like the use of sound effects and the set design.

Only thing I can critique is the focus pull, it is a bit too fast and makes the film sort of jump almost like a jump cut though there isn't one. I'd try and elongate the pull focus to a length that matches the speed of the zooming out.

Since there is a lot of footage to work with you could easily use a blur visual effect to do this, that is if you want to, but that is just my opinion.

Look forward to seeing more!:)

Thank you for tips! I will try to fix the focus problem in future shots. mini/smile

Imagination is more powerful than knowledge, because knowledge is limited to all we know and understand while imagination embraces the entire world