Nice!

Couple of little tips that I can think of:

You ought to either bring your camera down or raise your set up. With this film, many of your camera angles are from high up looking down (from the perspective of minifigs). This gives it a bit of a "security camera" type of vibe. Good if that's what you were going for, can be distracting if it isn't. If you raise your set or lower your camera so that the middle of the lens will be at about eye level with minifigs, then that will make the film more cinema-like.

Another tip is if you can't or don't want to use dialogue, subtitles can get more of your story across. For many film makers it can be hard to find people to record lines for their films, and one work around is to use subtitles or flash cards (think: old time silent films). Another option is to narrate the film, then you only need one voice actor instead of a handful.

Last edited by Dr Neo Lao (January 25, 2018 (03:04am))