Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
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LEGO Ninjago: Lloyd saves the day
a video that took me over a month in total to made. I would love to get some feedback to improve my skills
Oh I loved the speech bubbles! It's a very fun short video, keep up the good work! I really enjoyed the sets and the animation was very smooth. It was absolutely fantastic! There was just one tiny thing you can improve on, and it's the pacing. At times the animation felt a little bit slow, if you sped it up a little or edited it a little tighter, I think your already amazing film could've been even better.
This one was really good! The smooth movements and the set design were great! If there was one thing you could improve on, I would recommend less close-up shots and panning. I felt a little confused on what was going on mainly because for some shots the characters weren't entirely visible. I completely understand why you did this for better effect, but I couldn't help but be a little confused on what what exactly was going on. I loved all the shots you did with camera movement, as I know that is a really difficult task to accomplish. The character's speech bubbles really added to the film as well, as I love films that communicate there storyline smoothly with things like the speech bubbles. Amazing film overall! Keep it up! 
This was great! The sets and animation were very well done! The walking sound effects were a bit bland, but overall great job.
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