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The Legend of Paulus: A Tunnel in Time Chapter 1
The first of three part series that I'm working on at the moment. I'm looking for some constructive criticism before I start work on the next part. Thanks.
Nice, at 10 minutes for the first episode, this is shaping up to be some sort of an epic!
My main feedback at this point would be on the run cycle. When running, both feet should be off the ground at some point. This will help keep it from looking like skating.
Also a minor nitpick, but the opening paragraph got really close to the edges of the screen, and it would feel more balanced if you leave some space around the edge.
Keep up the great work!
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