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I love these commercials I decided to make one

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You need to get more then one person to do voices. Also you might want to use a white balance. I couldn't tell who was speaking.

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I know about the voices
What is white balance

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It's a setting on your camera.

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Also a white expanse. A white expanse is the white background.

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Despite a few technical errors, I thought it was actually pretty good. Nice job.

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I was especially impressed with the consistency of this film, overall there wasn't much light flicker and the animation was quite smooth and definitely not detrimental to the quality of the film (if you are a beginner, that alone is a remarkable feat). Excellent work! Keep filming, I think you can make great things if you keep it up.

Last edited by Squash (May 9, 2009 (05:58pm))

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This was my second brickfilm
thank you for the comments

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NEEDS MORE VOICES.
pretty good. You definitely need a white expanse.

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He does better than you do.

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I need a better mic.

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I use a Game MIcrophone does anyone know of a cheaper and better alternative
and thank you lil'jj

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"Microsoft doesn't have software like mine so what do your computers do?"
Pfft

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Technically, quite well done, though the lack of proper voicing and a white expanse were a bit detrimental. But the script just didn't work for me. Dragged on way too long, in my opinion, and the only joke that I found funny was the "Do you want me to track him?" at the end. Cut down to a typical 30 second commercial, I think this would have worked a lot better.

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I thought of splitting it to two commercials which i probably should have done but this is only my second brickfilm so its not the best

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The whole idea was really good.
The animation needed some work, so did the audio.
But overall, I found it very good.

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thank you it was my second one

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It was your second brickfilm?! That's amazing.

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