Haha, the premise of this film reminded me a lot of this film I made years ago, only yours was better and funnier.

I liked this film, mainly because of the voice work and silly jokes (especially at the end you had me laughing). Technically it's quite flawed though, and that's a shame because this film would have been so much more funny if you had overcome these technical obstacles.

My main two issues with the film is the fact that the framerate is pretty low, which makes the film look a bit like a slide show. On top of that (and this is one thing you should kind of need to get rid of in future films), the camera was very shaky. Try taping down both camera and sets before you start animating, to prevent this. And by taping down, I mean literally using tape to stabilize both. Don't let it get into the shot, of course!

All in all I really liked this short film.