Topic: The Metal Detector
The Metal Detector
A short clip pointing out one of the many flaws in the great, LEGO world
Note: These days, community activity has largely moved to the BiM Discord. Join us!
Pages 1
Bricks in Motion
Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
A place to discuss, share, and create stop motion films.
Ad
You are not logged in. Please login or register.
The Metal Detector
A short clip pointing out one of the many flaws in the great, LEGO world
Light flicker and bumps.
That was pretty great. Animation was pretty great in some points (I loved the part with the suitcases], that was really nice), but choppy in others. The story was told pretty well, although I think the joke could have been played out a bit better in the end (saying "wait this is for metal and we're all plastic]" is a bit too "ok I dunno how to play out this joke so I'll just explain it right away"). Voice acting was good; in fact, the audio in general was good.
As LegoDudez ever so subtly pointed out, there was a bit of light flicker and some set bumps, but it wasn't too bad. I could still enjoy the film and everything. Next time you might be considering taping down your camera and sets, though. 
Overall, I really liked this short film, and I think you did a great job. YAAY
I loved the story, and the animation was good(except for the set bumps and light flicker).
BertL is right about the ending, but the idea and story is great anyway.
Good job!
lolz, sorta.
Posts [ 5 ]
