Hehe, that wasn't half bad. Don't forget though that when you're doing a silent movie, you are going to tell the story through pictures. Just having a screen pop up every time someone normally would say a line isn't going to work very well. A good example is when the guard was greeting the celebrity and the celebrity ignored him. This could easily have been told through gestures and pictures, and not words.

But overall it wasn't bad at all. The choice of music was good, and some of the cinematography was really nice.