Topic: PUNCH

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Not very good. My cousins were over, and I told them about my films. They asked if I could make a quick film for them, so I did, and this is it.

BTW, I'm not sure if it's long enough to get into the film directory...

Re: PUNCH

Hmm, the camerawork could have been better (the character's heads were in the lower half of the screen, which didn't let us see a whole lot of the action). Also, there was a fairly obvious gap between the two when the guy in the right threw the punch, so it looks like the guy in the left fell over from nothing. And a better punching sound effect might have been more effective, this one just sounded like a slap rather than a punch.