Topic: Heroes of Today
Heroes of Today
Policemen stop a bank robbery.
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Heroes of Today
Policemen stop a bank robbery.
I really enjoyed it. The dolly shot was done very well, and the animation, despite having a low framerate, was good. I honestly have no complaints about this one, even though a lot of technical aspects could have been executed better (like the sets, or some of the voice acting). So, good job.
@MPfist0
Thanks for the advice. I already had a few people tell me that the voicing could be better, so I know what to work on for my future videos. The set was built with a low budget, but I was quite pleased with the result.
LeungStudios
*Unofficial Review*
Nothing more than a "cops and robbers" film here. I would advise that the director changes his/her plot next time to suprise the viewer. Still, with many plot holes, this film does have its upside. The camera effects were nice such as focus changes and dolly shots. I also was fond of the "tid-bit" at the end during the credits. Still, there's not much that I can say about this film, but a good improvement for the director.
Overall: 4
Story: 2
Animation: 4
Cinematography: 4
Sound: 5
-JP (Sorry if we offended you in the post above )
@ Juggernaut
I thought that my story was a bit too cliche, too, although I couldn't think of a better plot . I wanted to animate something with a meaning, such as honoring policemen (better chances at the contest!) instead of a more action-packed, intense, exciting, and violent police video. Anyways, thanks for the advice.
LeungStudios
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