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Well... not exactly flawless, but very, very good. The fight scene in the apartment had me stunned, and the pace was well directed.
Good job. Hope there's more awesome things to come!
OMG you rock! that was AWESOME!
That's amazing,the set design was the best part,I loved the couch.
The roof-running scene rocked too.
Great stuff. I'm always a fan of action sequences.
The legs into studs walk cycles don't work for me but there's so much to like it's hard to complain.
Well done.
The free-running and gunfight at the end of the film were extremely well-done (though I'm not so sure about the running cycle), as was most of the lighting, but overall I can't help but feel a bit let down by the story.
I would really like to have known more about the inner workings of the crime organization the man worked for, and just what "information" the man knew that made him such a threat. Also, I didn't like how you had the boss call the target and order him to kill the man, it took away what could have been an interesting surprise in the story (and could have allowed for broader plot development). As a result, the ending sequence became kind of predictable and the target's revelation to the man came off as abrupt instead of an interesting plot point.
Technically the film is well done, but is somewhat let down by its storytelling.
Last edited by MindGame (March 7, 2009 (03:42pm))
Just to start off, this is my favorite film so far this year.
The Good: The most important thing at the end of the day, is for a film to be entertaining, and this certainly was, mainly because of the quick pacing that moved the plot along quickly. The animation for the most part was wonderful coupled with great camera movements that gave a good intensity. You obviously spent a lot of time on your sets and they look very nice and add realism. I also thought some of the cinematography and the sound fx worked quite nicely. Basically, its technically very good.
Needs Improvement: The story was the weakest part of the film. Like mindgame said, there needed to be more background info. For example, the first free-running scene, is he being chased? Is he on a deadline? Or is that just the way he rolls... 
There were also a couple of jump-cuts, some awkward animations, and some of the dialogue was a little... meh. 
But like I said before, I think the most important thing is the entertainment value, and this one delivers. Great work! 
wow, that was amazing 
the fight scene was incredible,
and so was the free-running.
-EmmaExecute
Good film, great story, if a little bit predictable. Loved the line at the end. But the running needs to look more like running less like a sped-up walk.
That was simple amazing. The sets were awesome, the animation smooth, the picture clear...keep up the good work!
Thanks everyone, I didn't expect this film to be this good. I also agree that story is bad. I'm not really good at writing stories and I don't like writing dialouge.
Jus fantastic!!!!!!
No words for it...
-GS
Woah, finally a film that I found myself acually relating to other movies. The sets were excellent and made everything look so proffesional. Well done! 
I've seen something with a story similar to this, I don't know where.
But anyways, the animation was great, but you could've made the story longer. I was hoping for another fight scene at the end. But, it is still great film.
That was...amazing!!!
Just to start off, this is my favorite film so far this year.
The Good: The most important thing at the end of the day, is for a film to be entertaining, and this certainly was, mainly because of the quick pacing that moved the plot along quickly. The animation for the most part was wonderful coupled with great camera movements that gave a good intensity. You obviously spent a lot of time on your sets and they look very nice and add realism. I also thought some of the cinematography and the sound fx worked quite nicely. Basically, its technically very good.
Needs Improvement: The story was the weakest part of the film. Like mindgame said, there needed to be more background info. For example, the first free-running scene, is he being chased? Is he on a deadline? Or is that just the way he rolls...
exactly what I'd say. But technically, it is purely impressive. It's a beautiful film.
An excellent film, sets and animation were brilliant, but watch out for light flicker, it's very noticeable when it's in HD.
Good work! But in the End, How did you do that blood, was it in gimp?
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