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I've spent lots of time on this film, and I'm happy with the outcome. Thank you so much to everyone who helped. It's been great fun making this, and I enjoyed every part of it. I hope you enjoy watching it. So here it is:
The Bank Arcade - YouTube 2:50
The Bank Arcade - Vimeo
The Bank Arcade (Download) - MediaFire
Enjoy and please drop a comment! 
I didn't really get it at all. The editing wasn't very good as the titles we're too long. When the music stopped we had a blank screen for a few seconds before the film started.
The animation was good and all that stuff, but I didn't find it funny. It would have better with more jokes (because I suppose that you wanted it to be a comedy). Keep practising.
The animation was good as well as the sets(I see how much work went into that bank set). The audio was nice, except my lines(Need new mic dammit). I think you need to work on the cinematography as the shots were a little simplistic(But that's coming from my mouth xD), you might want to work on that a bit. I didn't find it funny, but it was a good enjoyable short. 
-Brain Wave
That was pretty good. The picture quality was really good, and the animation was good. The only flaw in the animation that I saw, was at the beginning, the characters kept shaking. But the animation was good otherwise.
I thought it needed the characters to sound more in to it. But that was pretty good. Which one was VN voicing? The one in the red?
I thought it needed the characters to sound more in to it.
You're completely right, and that's my fault. I didn't tell VN how to say the lines, and I didn't say them that enthusiastically myself. Next time I make a film with Phil and Eric I will definitely tell VN how to say his lines and get more into the mood with my lines.
Which one was VN voicing? The one in the red?
If you had read the opening titles and credits you would know that that is true. 
Thanks for the long review!
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