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Justice League.
Starring Batman, Superman and Wonder Woman.
A superhero film with no violence.

Last edited by bodville (November 9, 2012 (09:13pm))

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I think that you've got the wrong link. mini/wink
The animation was good, and the scale-swap was nicely done. It wasn't bad at all, but some flaws would be the odd-looking mouth animation, and Lex Luther's head being on Superman.
3.75/5

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Oops yes wrong link. You didn't like the lip syncing.
I haven't done much of this as it takes a lot of time.
Thought it came out pretty good.

I wonder whether anybody would spot the head change.
I put things like this into all my films. Bravo for spotting it.

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I luved it. It was funny and quite smooth. I dont have anything negative to say.

Re: Take Out

Very entertaining and watchable, I thought the mouth animations were good

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This is really, really good! I liked the scuba diver effect and the "sea-man" part ( mini/lol ). But, I have to agree with Pritchard on your problems with the mouth animation. For example, look at the shot at 0:37. Captain Vanish's mouth is moving, but on the reflection on the table, it isn't. I'm not saying you "suck" at stuff like this; because I myself can never get mouth movements to look just right. mini/wink

9.5/10

Last edited by Mickey (October 21, 2013 (07:06pm))

Have you seen a big-chinned boy?

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I chose not to update the mouths in the reflections due to time constraints.
Interesting that all the other issues regarding continuity were not spotted.

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