Re: Go Random 1: Bannanas
Technical? I think most of the flaws have been covered
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Technical? I think most of the flaws have been covered
Cool! Thank you. I am trying to improve.
Woah, JJ, never knew you had a health condition. I thought it was alright. Like many people already stated, the camera shook and it was too small. It wasn't that funny, but I saw what you were aiming for. Slight bit of shadows of your....limbs...hopefully. But overall it was Okay.
Yeah... I'm 13 and my voice sounds like a first grader with a sore throat. (but only on camera. 
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I've always noticed that cameras made my voice higher pitched.
Woah, JJ, never knew you had a health condition. I thought it was alright. Like many people already stated, the camera shook and it was too small. It wasn't that funny, but I saw what you were aiming for. Slight bit of shadows of your....limbs...hopefully. But overall it was Okay.
It's really random. It's even SO random that I think it isn't fun anymore.
And you're saying ''I use 15 fps'' and ''I tape it down'' , I can't believe you do that when I see this brickfilm.
And you're saying ''I use 15 fps'' and ''I tape it down'' , I can't believe you do that when I see this brickfilm.
I do. If you don't believe me that's fine.
Wow, lil'jj... That heart condition seems really painful... 
No it isn't. Suprisingly you get used to it.
Just being Curious but what symptoms does it give?
PLE, Plural Affusions, Post-Operation death, weakend immune system ect.
That sounds painful. I'm amazed that you get used to that.
Meh. I've had it all my life. I lived in the hospital for 3 years. When I got home the first night I couldn't sleep because it was so quiet. 
Omigod, that makes me feel depressed.
As for the age thing- based on photos of you, how you sound, and the kind of script you wrote for this, I would not guess that you were 13.
As for the film- I don't quite see how this could have been 15 fps. If it was, there is a fair amount of room for improvement. I suggest putting a bit for effort into the voice acting. If you know that you have a medical condition or young voice, you should set out to find a better voice actor. It's about making the film look AND sound good. Like people have said, you should strap the camera and the set down, or do a better job of that. There were noticable set bumps, and those set bumps are more noticable at a lower frame rate. That appeared to be 10fps, which is a good place to start for tests and beginning to hone your skills, but when you're releasing films, you need to animate at 15 fps. As for editing, i think there is a bit too much time between lines. I'm pretty sure only one person was talking, but he keeps moving between the time he says his line and gets punched, which is sort of awkward.
Just take these into mind next time, and try to improve upon this.
PLE, Plural Affusions, Post-Operation death, weakend immune system ect.
By the way, I might be wrong... but I don't think that "Post operation death" is a condition.
Last edited by LegoShark (May 2, 2009 (03:44pm))
Omigod, that makes me feel depressed.
I know, it does.
I know, it's just my name, I like it.
your name's sorta......gay...
anyway the film was to slow, the audio was bad, and to much movement for the talking(he still moves after he's done talking). remind's me about my first brickfilms. keep practicing! 
your FIRST brickfilms??? You mean ALL your brickfilms.
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