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This film was made for BRAWL.
Please ignore the "M" that goes on Jeffery and the Door. mini/tongue That was an acident.
Please enjoy.
Thanks to Daragh, Squash and Jimjambo. mini/smile
-JK

Last edited by Just Kidden (September 7, 2009 (02:55pm))

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Re: Forgot - B.R.A.W.L Entry

Hahaha, I really enjoyed that! Your animation has improved 10 fold but seemed a bit rushed at some points. And I made the film awesome mini/lol good job.

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Re: Forgot - B.R.A.W.L Entry

Hehe mini/lol . It was an enjoyable short, the one thing that I found annoying was that the main character goes from sitting on the chair to standing a couple of times in the beginning. Well done!

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I was very surprised, you have improved vastly. It was funny and the animation was decent. Well done.

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Re: Forgot - B.R.A.W.L Entry

Nice Animation.
Daragh did a good job for the act. mini/smile

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SmallTimeProductions wrote:

I was very surprised, you have improved vastly. It was funny and the animation was decent. Well done.

I've been practicing a lot since "Don't Touch My Epidermis". Thanks! mini/smile

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WOAH!!

Save my own - I'm loving all these BRAWL entries so far. This may have been the most shocking. You've improved so much I though you'd stolen some-one elses movie!!

The combination of clever sound, screenplay, and an awesome disco track makes this movie a strong contender for the contest.

Nice one! You've earnt my respect and I will forever use this as proof that you can improve if you really try!

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I liked this short little film. I can't add much to what has been said already, but this is a good contender.

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Yeah, you're really improving fast! Respect man!

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mini/XD
Thanks, guys! mini/bigsmile

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Keep the good work going. mini/smile

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Re: Forgot - B.R.A.W.L Entry

Nice. I couldn't really here the old man though.

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Turn up the volume, and you should be able to hear it. Or put some headphones on.

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Haha, nice one! I really enjoyed that mini/bigsmile

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Like almost everybody else said, you have improved so much. Good job mini/smile

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Your animation has improved vastly. The story was pretty decent.
The part with the "Dry clean only" gave me a chuckle. mini/lol
Nice job JK. You are becoming a more respectable member. mini/wink

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COOL! mini/smile Not the BEST vid I ever saw but it's worth a review at least. mini/wink

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Really good, and good use of the music I made for you mini/bigsmile
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I like that a lot!

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Download link now available! mini/smile

Last edited by Just Kidden (September 13, 2009 (08:27am))

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