Topic: John Hus
John Hus
This is a short documentary film about the great reformer, John Hus.
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John Hus
This is a short documentary film about the great reformer, John Hus.
I'm afraid that his film was rather boring, which is unfortunate, concerning the inherent drama of the story.
Contributors to this included:
The choice of music
The monotone narration
The lack of actual animation
The worst thing was that it broke the most basic rule of storytelling: show, don't tell your audience what happened.
I don't mean to sound unfairly negative, but I think that you can do a lot better. 
- Aaron
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