Topic: The Lost Machine of Time

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The Lost Machine of Time

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A brickfilm I made for my Highschool film class. I got an A on it. Looking back on it now, it came out OKAY, but there are several errors and the picture quality isn't amazing.

Oh, and the story is a bit slow.

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Into the darkness once more. I walk into the unknown. To a far better life than I've ever known.

Re: The Lost Machine of Time

Tbh it gets a bit boring because its very repetitive, but other than that, a good film, and congratulations on your A!

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L0stInPie wrote:

Tbh it gets a bit boring because its very repetitive, but other than that, a good film, and congratulations on your A!


Yeah, I could of cut down the beginning a good minute. I was more or less trying to show what the character was going through...how boring his life was. I just over did it. mini/XD

Thank you very much for your feedback! mini/bigsmile








If anyone else wants to leave feedback, feel free to! Harsh or nice, cool or wrong, I don't mind. Even if this is my older work, I am still always trying to improve! mini/bigsmile

Last edited by Scypax (November 25, 2009 (11:04pm))

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Into the darkness once more. I walk into the unknown. To a far better life than I've ever known.