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Topic: [Script] Ice Cream

Two friends are in the park to eat an ice cream.
Featuring:
BOY
GIRL
ICE CREAM MAN

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BOY: "Just sit down, I´ll buy one for you."
GIRL: " Oh thank you honey!"
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BOY: " One medium and one large ice cream please."
ICE CREAM MAN:"What sort?"
BOY: "Vanilla, please."
ICE CREAM MAN:"Both?"
BOY: " Yes."
ICE CREAM MAN: "Okay. 7 dollars please."
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GIRL: "That was a wonderful day!"
BOY: "Yeah. I´m tired but for you I would do this ordeal again."
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ICE CREAM MAN: "Hey! Do I hear some sarcasm?"
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ICE CREAM MAN: "Here is your ice!"
BOY and GIRL: "Thank you!"
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BOY: "Hey! Ice cream man! Where is our second ice?"
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ICE CREAM MAN: " Stay here!"
GIRL: " What was the red stuff on his knife?"
ICE CREAM MAN: "That´s strawberry!"
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BOY: "Oh Bleep!"

I hope that helps.


The BOY and GIRL will changed in names soon.
Do have any suggestions/questions/critic?
Sorry for so much text.

Last edited by AncientEngine (March 10, 2010 (08:24am))

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Re: [Script] Ice Cream

Urm....

I didn't get the end.

I may just be stupid (Likely) but did he throw the knife at the girl, or what? mini/tongue

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Re: [Script] Ice Cream

No, the second ice escapes but the Ice Cream Man don´t want to let the ice leave so he tries to kill he ice. The girl only asks "Why is knife cloured red", after the ice´s  escape she (the girl)  got fainted (Who would not faint if an ice tries to escape?!). I know it´s pointless, but in my opinion funny.

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Re: [Script] Ice Cream

Ummmm... I don't quite understand this...

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Re: [Script] Ice Cream

What do you don´t understand?
Maybe I take some pictures of the set and write the dialoque(?) under the pictures, if that would be easier.

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Re: [Script] Ice Cream

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4050/4422636818_f1d4ec3b90.jpg
BOY: "Just sit down, I´ll buy one for you."
GIRL: " Oh thank you honey!"
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4028/4422637086_7e443b1b92.jpg
BOY: " One medium and one large ice cream please."
ICE CREAM MAN:"What sort?"
BOY: "Vanilla, please."
ICE CREAM MAN:"Both?"
BOY: " Yes."
ICE CREAM MAN: "Okay. 7 dollars please."
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GIRL: "What a wonderful day!"
BOY: "Yeah. I´m tired but for you I would repeat this ordeal tommorow."
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GIRL: "Hey! Do I hear some sarcasm?"
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ICE CREAM MAN: "Here is your ice!"
BOY and GIRL: "Thank you!"
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BOY: "Hey! Ice cream man! Where is our second ice?"
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ICE CREAM MAN: " Stay here!"
GIRL: " What is the red stuff on his knife?"
ICE CREAM MAN: "That´s strawberry!"
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BOY: "Oh !@#$ !" (Bleeped out)

I hope that helps. Sorry for double post. I did my best ^^".

Last edited by AncientEngine (March 10, 2010 (11:00pm))

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Re: [Script] Ice Cream

I could voice act if you like!! mini/smile

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Re: [Script] Ice Cream

That would be great! Which character do you want to record?
Here are the lines:
ICE CREAM MAN: " Stay here!"
BOY: "Yeah. I´m tired but for you I would do this ordeal again."
GIRL: lol
Just send them at ancientengine@gmx.de .
Can you record them as .wav file?
Thank you!

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Re: [Script] Ice Cream

AncientEngine wrote:

That would be great! Which character do you want to record?
Here are the lines:
ICE CREAM MAN: " Stay here!"
BOY: "Yeah. I´m tired but for you I would do this ordeal again."
GIRL: lol
Just send them at ancientengine@gmx.de .
Can you record them as .wav file?
Thank you!

I'll try out as the Ice Cream Man. I'll have it to you by the evening. mini/bigsmile

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Re: [Script] Ice Cream

I'm sorry, but I'm really struggling to work out what's going on here. So it starts with a boy and a girl on a date, they order two ice creams, get served one, then the 'chef' runs out with a knife and he says that there's strawberry on it. The end.

Would you care to elaborate?

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Re: [Script] Ice Cream

@Hazzat

Hazzat wrote:

So it starts with a boy and a girl on a date,

Yes.

Hazzat wrote:

they order two ice creams, get served one, then the 'chef' runs out with a knife

Right till here.

Hazzat wrote:

and he says that there's strawberry on it. The end.

No. He tries to get the ice. The ice is jumping away.The chef throws a knife at the ice but he doesn´t hit the ice. Now the Girl asks"What was the red thing on his knife?".
The ice man says that the thing was strawberry ice.

@Michael
No.

Got it? IF NOT, TELL ME WHICH PART YOU DON`T UNDERSTAND.

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Re: [Script] Ice Cream

Since the Grammar police aren't here, I'll do it for him. WORK ON YOUR GRAMMAR, BOI. I don't know whats wrong with the script, but I'm just not liking it that much. Sorry...

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Re: [Script] Ice Cream

It´s pretty hard for me to write something big like this. Sorry, I´m going to change it soon.

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Re: [Script] Ice Cream

Okay, I made a new thread for this, hope everything is right there.
PLEASE DONT POST ANY MORE REPLIES!!!

HERE

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