Topic: Jeffery And The Old Man: Love Bites UNFINISHED

I'm so, very, very sorry.

I worked so hard on this I felt I just needed to release it like this. Yeah.
Special thanks to my voice actors. (Jargon and Squash)

Sorry to Daragh, Lamplight, Splodge and Peanut for not using their lines in this. I couldn't because I didn't get to the part where their lines were.

Special thanks to Awesomeonomy.

Sorry that I didn't get around to finishing it.

-JK

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I watched this with my speakers off because it is midnight. I loved it. And the subtitles helped, too. mini/smile

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Awww, you should have finished this... mini/sad

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Anything else? mini/cat

-JK

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That was a great film, very nice voices and I found the animation to be very smooth. Would have been an awesome finished film.

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I liked it. It was fun to be in it. I wish you had finished it. mini/sad
Oh, and the blu-tac was super-obvious.

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That was kind of intentional. I was trying to make it look like guts or something but I obviously failed. mini/tongue

Thanks guys. mini/bigsmile keep the comments comin' plz]

-JK

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Really good movie! mini/smile

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Even like this it was very enjoyable. You have a very good comedic ability, keep it up. Can't wait for Shpiderman the Movie.

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I absolutely adored this. I've always loved your animation.

But it seems to me that your film quality has dwindled a slight bit. E.G. there were a few set bumps, which were so rare in your earlier films, the framing can be a little awkward at times and there seems to be a few out of focus shots. I was a little disappointed, I know you can do much better stuff though. mini/wink

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I was not really impressed with this film, not because of the animation or jokes, it's really because of the story. I'm not saying that this particular story hasn't been created in the past before, I'm just saying that these types of films are really starting to become more and more unoriginal each day. What I would like from you is a film with some sort of non-cliche story line, and dialog without the jokes or puns. Now technically, this film didn't endure either. As Lamplight mentioned earlier today, there were set bumps, the camera quality dwindled at some parts, and the framing wasn't all that nice either (way to go for reinforcing what LL just said, JP 2). The animation itself wasn't too bad, however, and Aaron's voice is always a pleasure to hear.

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I totally agree with you JP. The reason I posted it like this is because it was either redo the whole thing or just release it unfinished, and I did not want to redo all of it because it took me like 5 months to get to where I was. I was constantly redoing shots and i just got sick of it after a while.

Thanks for the critique guys. mini/smile keep it comin plz]

-JK

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Ah, missed when this came out. I have to say, I quite liked it. Your animation style is fantastic. The way you use bricks to exaggerate certain motions is really engaging- I could watch that stuff forever. Jargon's voice acting was great, I loved the laid back delivery. It's a shame you didn't finish, but I understand why you quit. Still, a shame it wasn't finished. If you ever need me for another JATOM, just shoot me a line. Acting in these films is enormous fun.

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Thanks, Squash. I'll definitely contact you if I ever get another idea for a JATOM film. I've had quite a few, so I'll probably be making more sometime. mini/bigsmile

-JK

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Hey my names Jeffery! Lols mini/lol That was awesome animation! By the way what camera did you shoot that in and what resolution were the pictures?

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