Nice job, especially for your first film with your new camera! My only problem is that the audio effects are very loud, and they cover up my beautiful voice.

Could have been more animation - there was quite a large period where the character was just standing there with his arm up...

Thanks for helping to prove a point though.

I know I keep saying 'I agree a lot', but I agree that a little more animation was needed. Also, I know this is really nit-picky, but I think Vader should have swung his lightsaber faster, and there either shouldn't have been a gap between the guy falling apart, or there should have been a longer gap if you wanted a comedic effect. But this is really nitpicking - I enjoyed this little short.

I too like this campaign for more original movie ideas (I may just join it)

-MRB