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The Superhero
Worked on this film from 8 AM to 11 PM, I hope all of you like it, pleae no bashing!
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Since it has my godly voice within, this is the greatest THAC entry 
Since it has my godly voice within, this is the greatest THAC entry
LOL, WIN!
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Wut is this I don't even.
WTF happened after 0:30?
Anyway, as for the previous 30 seconds...it was OK, the animation was kinda sub-par, but it is an improvement to your previous animations, and you were on a serious time budget. The story was kinda meh, some guy waits for a call from a sherrif to beat up crime. Not very interesting, I must say. Perhaps a little more goings-on besides him waiting beside his phone and talking to the sherrif would've helped?
2.5/5
Wut is this I don't even.
WTF happened after 0:30?
Anyway, as for the previous 30 seconds...it was OK, the animation was kinda sub-par, but it is an improvement to your previous animations, and you were on a serious time budget. The story was kinda meh, some guy waits for a call from a sherrif to beat up crime. Not very interesting, I must say. Perhaps a little more goings-on besides him waiting beside his phone and talking to the sherrif would've helped?
2.5/5
Thanks
.Any other feedback guys?
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Reminds me of Godard. I like it a lot.
It was okay, but the ending is a bit rushed. Which is understandable, considering it's THAC.
I like it a lot.
Aw, thanks Night Owl, great to hear GOOD feedback from such a legend as yourself 
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.NO CRAWME BROKE OUT. 
Good film.
I'll be honest at the very start I wasn't drawn in but the jumping editing fast paced cuts started to grow on me but I was still sitting on the fence... then I heard "NO CRAWME BROKE OUT" and boy was I feeling good! I burst out laughing at the shear simplicity of that line! It's a great line and it's going to enter the lexicon of every brickfilmer. Love it.
NO CRAWME BROKE OUT!
Night Owl wrote:I like it a lot.
Aw, thanks Night Owl, great to hear GOOD feedback from such a legend as yourself
Thats not feedback dude.
@Lucas, I know, Hazzat just told me that he was joking, and didn't like it. I realize it isn't feedback.
.... Gosh, what to say, what to say?
Ummmm, your getting better?
If I understood it more, I think I would have liked it alot more. Even though the animation was a little as Brickord said: sub-par.
Animation: 2/5
Voice Acting: 3/5
Storyline: 2.5/5
Overall: 2.5/5
(Based on a 15 point overall scale.)
-Skwiz
Thanks, Skwizitanee. I've been getting a lot of criticism, and a lot of one word comments on YouTube like "Good", or two comment ones like "Really cool" "haha funny." Sometimes I hate YT, I like to hear why people actually like it .
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This film is so bad but will definitively be a brickfilming classic because of that line.
Perhaps try to record your lines in a smaller room, there was something of an echo. After the previous comment, I watched it 5 times and cried:lol:
Last edited by HairballPictures (December 31, 2010 (11:19am))
You're problem isn't the animation or voices, it's the story. You have to consider that other people are going to be watching it, and they need understand it. I don't know if it's allowed it THAC, but show it to a family member or something beforehand.
Overall it was okay. NO CRAWME BROKE OUT.
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