Re: Frame from Your Upcoming Film
You should let other people get feedback first brenden17 before posting your frame.
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You should let other people get feedback first brenden17 before posting your frame.
Hey, it's fine, Kinz. People can critique two frames at once.
@Brenden Very nice. I like the color grading. Is the green baseplate supposed to be showing through?
@RobBrick Not a very flattering angle, IMHO. Also, it seems a bit desaturated or something.
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No, I don't see.
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Proper English please.
Kinzcove- my bad
golden- probably would have been better to use a grey base plate but I don't have one
Brenden,
Looks pretty cool, although one thing I would do is add a small amount of light on the gears (I'm assuming they're gears).
Shining a low-watt bulb through one of These gives a very nice, industrial look.
Looks cool brendan. I like it.
OK, this one's better.
I'm liking the lighting, but it's a little too bright on the figs.
@RobBrick thats a nice frame
here a frame from my upcoming TOY film with robin hood
Nice job, although the focus is more on the bricks on the left hand corner than it is the minifig.
I think that's the point.
I like the frame, it has some good lighting in the foreground, which makes the sword have a nice glowing effect to it
I am no longer doing TREASURE anymore. This is a shot from my detective movie "Hit and Run", which is about a mysterious murder that has happened out on a highway. It's supposed to take place in the 1940's.
Feedback please!
It's quite a bland frame, and the background looks like a bedroom wall. I would recommend spicing it up with a more visually pleasing angle.
The aspect ratio is smooshed.
Also, as Mr. Awesomeness stated, it is rather bland. He, however, did not give an example on how to 'spice it up' other then changing the angle.
A few things would be to add a curb on the road, maybe a few trees and definitely a background.
Isn't Hit & Run the name of an old Hali film?
Isn't Hit & Run the name of an old Hali film?
I am no longer doing TREASURE anymore. This is a shot from my detective movie "Hit and Run", which is about a mysterious murder that has happened out on a highway. It's supposed to take place in the 1940's.
Feedback please!
He is most utterly dead. 
I would add a background, add some flowers or grass, then I might add something kinda poking into the seen from the left of the screen.
I also fail to see anyone in clear focus. I would also either chroma key, or build a set to block the wall.
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