Topic: ToY: Robin hood and the cursed gems part 1

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Robin hood and the cursed gems part 1 BIM 2011 TOY

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robin hood decides to steal some gems from the king but is unaware of the curse they hold

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Re: ToY: Robin hood and the cursed gems part 1

The storyline was not that good and you can improve your animation, but that was pretty nice!

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   -Story: 3/10
   -Cinematography: 5/10
   -Sound: 4/10
   -Animation: 5/10
   -Effects: 3/10
   -Music: 5/10

   
→OVERALL: 5/10

Re: ToY: Robin hood and the cursed gems part 1

Your set is nicely detailed.  And that's the only positive thing I can say about this flick.  It has the whole gamut of inconsistent camera work (focus, stability, white balance).  The animation started out okay, then it felt like you stopped trying after the first scene.  The story would have held up had you not rushed the whole thing.  If not for the deadline, this could have turned out better.

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Re: ToY: Robin hood and the cursed gems part 1

What did you film this with? It looks like you shot with an extreme wide angle lens, or through a magnifying glass, or something that sort, given the distortion on the edges.

I agree with Lech's comments on the sets.  I'll admit, I found the sword throw shot to be sort of hilarious for reasons that would be difficult to pin down.

http://i.imgur.com/wcmcdmf.png