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Escaping The World

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In a future society, humans are required to stay indoors. Two boys question that rule.

This was originally an entry to the Ten Lines contest held by Just Kidden and Hazzat, but I was unable to finish this in time.

Last edited by Chris W. (January 16, 2012 (07:18pm))

Re: Escaping The World

Nice film,the effects were awesome,but the animation was a little choppy.
4/5.

-CDP

Re: Escaping The World

yeah...loved this!

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cooldynamyteproductions wrote:

Nice film,the effects were awesome,but the animation was a little choppy.

Well, I'll say the opposite... mini/lol I think the animation is good, but I don't like the effects (The house at 3:47)... mini/wink

Good job.

   ____________
 
   -Concept: 6/10
   -Cinematography: 5/10
   -Sound: 5/10
   -Animation: 6/10
   -Music: 6/10
   -Effects: 3/10

   
→OVERALL: 5.5/10

Re: Escaping The World

cooldynamyteproductions wrote:

Nice film,the effects were awesome,but the animation was a little choppy.
4/5.

-CDP

Id have to agree with Loïc F-B the animation was amassing but the effects could have been better.

Personally I think that this used the lines i the most creative way, it is a pitty it wasn't made in time

the story was no less then amassing but I would have liked to see maby a little more afterwards about how the world got to be

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nothing

especially since the deadline was missed anyway it would have been fun to go a little farther with the story.

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Nice, Hal (Onion) did a great job voicing this. I also liked the Inception theme, that was a nice touch.

Have you seen a big-chinned boy?