Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
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These are the first films I've made. Just looking for some feedback.thanks:)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ALQoHibCJg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6kQKVTF9daw
I liked it. the voices were better then I thought they would be and the animation was pretty good.
It was good, although the blaster fire in the backgroung got a little annoying 
-Jon64
Good, but it goes under Tests
goldenbrick, "Test Fire" refers to the story; these aren't tests.
Nice for a first try, the animation was decent and I liked the sets. I thought the voice acting could have been more engaging but the timing was pretty good. The foam effect at the end of the second one worked well.
If those are your first, than that's really good. 
The animation itself was pretty good, the only thing was there was quite a bit of set/camera bumping and some light flicker, but you'll learn how to avoid those. I also liked the concept, this could be a good series if you continue with it. I thought your timing was good and the voice acting was generally good, although voicing two characters with the same voice gets kind of confusing
Just a couple rookie mistakes (that we all make) that you need to fix and you'll be well on your way. I look forward to your next film.
Thanks for the feedback, all of your comments will help me make my next film better.
The timing of the gun's explosion in the second one was perfect. "Oh yeah I feel safe. Trying to g-*KABOOM!!*"
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