The set design was beautiful but the light flicker took away from it.

Other than that it was an amazing job!

I'm extremely forgiving when it comes to light flicker, so I'll just go ahead and say how amazing I thought this was. It was. Awesome, that is. All those words at once. Yeah.

And I love the way you made the mod element so in-your-face when they were down on the planet. Plus, I'm super-jel of that Adventurers yeti bigfig

"Nothing goes down 'less I'm involved. No nuggets. No onion rings. No nothin'. A cheeseburger gets sold in the park, I want in! You got fat while we starved on the streets...now it's my turn!" -Harley Morenstein

this was beautiful. i loved every part of this - even the light flicker!! i felt like the light flicker added to the charm. there's something about light flicker in general that i like, in especially well-made films. .. makes things feel more human idk!!

only part i didn't like was my voice acting! wish i coulda done better but you know!! i'm sick!! oh well!! if you need me to voice act again just hmu, i'll do better next time!!

Last edited by Just Kidden (December 30, 2013 (12:05pm))

Yes, I was waiting for this.
It's good, but felt like it was the intro for something much longer.
They were all just getting introduced when WHAM! the credits started rolling.
The light flicker was annoying, and some of the animation was noticeably lower quality than the rest.
But the sets are very nice, the lighting is superb. I really like that opening shot and the Sneeuwpop's charge, those were both done very well. Captain Thacker is a fun name, and the "Evil Readings" exchange is great.

The Sneeuwpop's voice sounds too similar to the one spaceman, and should have had some effects on it or something. You're a good voice actor, but you've been so many roles in so many of your films that (to me at least) it's becoming a bit of a distraction. And I would have recommended at least getting Wilson to take a stab at it or something. It's easy to overlook being THAC, but keep that in mind with future films.

It's a great short, but does end very suddenly and has the light flicker problem.
Still, 24 hours is rough, and you did an amazingly great job for that time.
I'm sure this will rank pretty high.

Well then, you're going to love I am the Night.  That film is pretty human.

It's okay, I was considering just re-using your noises from Sharks and Clowns, but I went ahead and tried the new noises in place to see if they would work and it was okay so I just left it so.
Your noises from Sharks and Clowns are perfect as though a divine blessing of perfection has been bestowed upon them.

Yeah, I noticed that be only before it was to late.  Basically everything I did during thac was not thought trough very well at all.  I probably should have stopped to think more, but no time.
I was considering bringing Wilson in for something, but his voice is actually pretty close to mine.  But one of the things I was wanting to do was a film about a southern woman, because Wilson's southern woman voice is just the best.

There was actually supposed to be more a of a battle between the people and the Braigshtalv as well as a dance party with a disco ball in the ship when they won, but that was all cut.
I was also planning to put in a short ending narration from Sonjira, but Lee thought I should leave it without it, as he felt that the sudden ending was perfect.

I didn't want to take any risks.  The mod element is basically everywhere.  The only times I had to do something special was in the first scene when the ship comes up I had the mod cropped out and the first shot when the sneeuwpop spoke I had it in the background with some new rock I had built because of the angle.

Anyone chance you might do an extended cut in the days/weeks to come? This sound hee-ha-larrymazing.

"Nothing goes down 'less I'm involved. No nuggets. No onion rings. No nothin'. A cheeseburger gets sold in the park, I want in! You got fat while we starved on the streets...now it's my turn!" -Harley Morenstein

I can finally read the end credits! Hurray!

I really liked it, but it's no "The Lost Invention". Great job, being able to put it together and all, though. And good job to all the cast.

Once again. Genius!

filmyguy1

Oh my god.

The lighting. The sets. The voice acting. The humor. Its so good! This is something a normal animator would spend weeks working on. How did you do it!? REVEAL YOUR SECRETS!!