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The Fate of Exillius II Trailer 2
The Second Trailer for upcoming Sci-fi Film!
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Nice. Your animation definitely looks like you are improving, for the most part is was smooth. Though it could use some speeding up, it wasn't bad. The space lighting also looked cool.
The most notable problems here is the light flickering, and your use of camera angles. Flickering can be avoided if you are using lamps to light your set, by wearing dark colors, and by changing the settings on your camera to manual. If your settings are on auto that will give you all sorts of problems. It looks like the camera angles are all wide angles. For a more dramatic feel, more camera angles definitely helps, especially close ups on the characters while they are talking. I also saw a hand in there once or twice.
But nevertheless, I look forward to seeing what you got! 
Keep it up Tim!
Nice. Your animation definitely looks like you are improving, for the most part is was smooth. Though it could use some speeding up, it wasn't bad. The space lighting also looked cool.
The most notable problems here is the light flickering, and your use of camera angles. Flickering can be avoided if you are using lamps to light your set, by wearing dark colors, and by changing the settings on your camera to manual. If your settings are on auto that will give you all sorts of problems. It looks like the camera angles are all wide angles. For a more dramatic feel, more camera angles definitely helps, especially close ups on the characters while they are talking. I also saw a hand in there once or twice.
But nevertheless, I look forward to seeing what you got!
Keep it up Tim!
The Hand was only there once 
. But I'll try wearing darker colors for less flicker.
Harborlight wrote:Nice. Your animation definitely looks like you are improving, for the most part is was smooth. Though it could use some speeding up, it wasn't bad. The space lighting also looked cool.
The most notable problems here is the light flickering, and your use of camera angles. Flickering can be avoided if you are using lamps to light your set, by wearing dark colors, and by changing the settings on your camera to manual. If your settings are on auto that will give you all sorts of problems. It looks like the camera angles are all wide angles. For a more dramatic feel, more camera angles definitely helps, especially close ups on the characters while they are talking. I also saw a hand in there once or twice.
But nevertheless, I look forward to seeing what you got!
Keep it up Tim!
The Hand was only there once
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