Topic: Evening Stroll
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Last edited by Noah (May 27, 2017 (01:37pm))
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Last edited by Noah (May 27, 2017 (01:37pm))
The animation is good, it's well paced. You should put stuff like this in the WIP and Test forum, though.
Moved topic here. Fall Below-don't be afraid to put your test where it belongs. Your 3 second clip doesn't show much to critique. I did enjoy how the character continued to walk as the car blocked our view. The footstep sound you used seemed a bit out of place - sounded like a raspy computer key being hit.
Jared
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Last edited by Noah (May 27, 2017 (01:36pm))
I wouldn't recommend having credits and an into if the video is only a few seconds long. Rather, have the credits in the description. The walk did look good and the car going by gave a nice moving atmosphere.
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Last edited by Noah (May 27, 2017 (01:39pm))
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