Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
A place to discuss, share, and create stop motion films.
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My Dad Turns 44 Tomorrow
Daddio was just a funny name I decided to call it, because it reminds me of the word "Dad".
Please tell me what I need to improve on, thank you.
NEEDS NEW CAM!
NEEDS NEW CAM!
NEEDS LESSONS IN WRITING REVIEWS!
Like your last film, everything was out of focus (really must fix that), but the animation wasn't too bad. I could tell that it was recycled, though. Also, 3/4 of it was titles! The credits don't have to say "Writer: me. Animator: me. Director: me. Voices: me. Sets: me." You can just say "Writer, animator, director and sets: me." Credits aren't really part of the movie, so keep them short. 
NEEDS NEW CAM!
COULD YOU GUYS PLEASE STOP REMINDING ME ABOUT HOW BAD MY CAMERA IS!!!!!! 
NEEDS NEW CAM!
And do you like it when people say that your cam is bad? No. So treat people the way you want to be treated.
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Hazzat was right, it was out of focus and too much of it was titles/credits.
I thought it was pretty good 
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