Topic: [realease] Dead - part 1

The first short part. Part 2 is in writing, part 2 will be longer and more story etc.
Enjoy!
link:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=051e4yk76_4

Re: [realease] Dead - part 1

Aww man I was just getting into that and it ended. Bring on part 2 (minus the foot step sfx)
Good work DoubleV

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Re: [realease] Dead - part 1

It was ok. The foot step fx was a little too annoying, but the animation and lighting were well done.

Re: [realease] Dead - part 1

Spectacularly average. Comically overdone violence and uninspired camera angles, average use of music and sound effects, but the lighting was well done and acting was decent, though poorly recorded. Tough to say anything else about a 0:42 second clip.

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Re: [realease] Dead - part 1

TheNoodle26 wrote:

Spectacularly average. Comically overdone violence and uninspired camera angles, average use of music and sound effects, but the lighting was well done and acting was decent, though poorly recorded. Tough to say anything else about a 0:42 second clip.

well if its all so poor average and lame I'm sure you can tell me how to do it better?

Re: [realease] Dead - part 1

bodville wrote:

Aww man I was just getting into that and it ended. Bring on part 2 (minus the foot step sfx)
Good work DoubleV

Thaks=D part 2 is in the writing but ive got the story already all figured out and the story will be more explained and it  will be longer etc.

Youre right about the foot step sfx when i had my headset on it seemed alright but then i watched it without headset and it was indeed anoying.

-DoubleVstudios

Re: [realease] Dead - part 1

Nice, just you need to make the foot steps quieter, not remove them.

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