Re: Working on a new story idea

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You should toss some emotion into the fight. Like make the baddy put a knife to a passerbyes throught.

That's a great idea. Want emotion? Toss in some knife action, stir, and VOILA! Out pops some emotion!

No, but in reality, the best way to add emotion is probably not to just stab some guy on the street. The audience needs character development before they start actually caring about anything that happens.

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Hmm, the arm thing reminds me of Terminator 2. The bad guy can turn his arm into metal, but nothing with moving parts (guns, etc).

Sounds like it could be interesting...

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I think the bad bounty hunter should be a dark, creepy, cruel character, not just violent.

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I'd rather put an a la Joker bad guy in the movie. Those guys
who are smart, and just want to see the world burn (I like that quote)

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interesting maybe you need someone in between, like, someone who doesnt care who wins as long as their twisted version of "justice" like, he will kill both if he has to.

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I think that the story is pretty interesting.
Here's some rough ideas:

  • Maybe there should be an explanation for why or how the 'hero' got his springy legs and how the other bounty hunter got his arm.

  • Both of the bounty hunters have these 'flashbacks' of their early childhood which they both find out later that they were best friends or they were related to each other or something like that.

Those are just some random ideas that I thought of.

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Reminds me of Metroid...

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you shouldn't make the bounty hunter like jango fett instarwars make him have more of an assiny feel that would make it more interesting

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nah, jango is too cliche.

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I see no reason that he shouldn't be a bounty hunter just because there's been bounty hunters in other movies.

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yea make him like an assassin

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Is the enemy bounty hunter just out to kill the Hero because he wants to eliminate the compitition?  If so, maybe you could think about having something personal between them.  And through out the movie you could have little parts of a flashback of what happened between the two, until it all comes together, or just have a single flashback.  I dunno if those ideas are any good, but there you go.

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