I think the animation is a great improvement from the last film I saw from you. Though, I have to say, I don't really consider two people and a bicycle an angry mob. Make it a bit bigger next time.
Also, I agree with Aaron, the intro is vital if you want to make one of these.

filmyguy1

Sorry I didn't check my Inbox. I miss the days of yore when you get an actual alert when someone sends you a message.

Anyway, I liked that you had little nods to me and Bux's films, and Benny Hill chases are always a plus, but otherwise, it really lacked pizazz. I don't think most people "get" this series quite yet. Maybe you guys should just wait and watch more episodes and see the approach we take to making these before you go out and try to make one.

Or, channeling your inspiration into making something original is good too, I guess.

Reasons why I did some of those things:
If you look closely, you will see the hobo, the pirate, and the bike. I wanted to make a refrence to all the other ones.
The reason why I did not do the intro was because I wanted to do my own spin on the series. (Also because I can't get the hand and the words to go on WMM... )
And when DC screams, I wanted it to be kind of like a "NOT AGAAAIN!!!" Scream. Even though you heard nothing, he still screams. You just can't hear it because of the Benny Hill music.

Last edited by Just Kidden (February 18, 2009 (03:02pm))

Hmm. After two seconds the whole "Dane Cook gets ...." was gone completely. It started off good (with the music, that is), but then it went nowhere.

Seriously, what angry mob isn't equipped with pitchforks and torches?

Agreed.