Wow, that was good for a first film. Way better than the first one I ever made. Here are some tips though. First, you should try easing in and out. Check fancypant's channel for some tutorials. Also, you should try putting a screen around the filming area, so we don't see your house. Last thing, try to reduce light flicker. You can avoid this by filming at night and turning all functions on manual. I feel we have a good brickfilmer in the making here.

Thanks, fellas! 

@WtA (I hope it's cool I call you WtA as I've called you it a couple times now) I've been thinking about getting a green screen for a while now.  It does sort of take away the feel when you can see the microwave and fridge in the back for a couple shots, huh ?  Anyway, I actually love Fancypants's work and am looking for his tutorial in another tab as I type.

@C3LegO I'm glad you liked that!  I'm hoping to get some cool shots like that (and better ones, if I'm lucky) in the future episodes.

Well, I don't think it's a problem the fact that the animation isn't perfect. Looks a very promising serie (looks like it's going to be a series, right?). I agree you should try to make a set: doesn't have to be gorgeous, full of detail, four walls and a door would work for me (I'm not expecting anything outstanding for first movies). But, other than this, there's nothing I can point out. Voice acting was convencing to me, and has fine scripwriting (at least you do write something, unlike me ).

looks good but try to put a screen or "backround" so we don't see anything unwanted.

I dunno,
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