To be honest I don't think that its a bad Idea to get subscribers however after watching that I wouldn't subscribe.
a fair warning my revues tend to get long.
First thing that I noticed that was weird about the film was your film making name.
I don't know but isn't Lego Maniac already taken? it sounded familiar.
second you need to pick up the frame rate on this.
This is just a guess but I will assume that you are taking pictures and using software like windows movie maker to put them together. Don't do this.
If you are take a look Here to look at free animation software.
I would also not suggest playing the same music over and over.
It was a nice song but you might want to look here to find some free background music that is a bit longer.
The final thing that you need to add is a plot.
I had no idea who these people were or what was happening.
a story behind the animation would be nice
those are the only things you
have to really should change.
I also have some Questions about why they where killing so many people that didn't look like goblins.
Also what was the clay.
This was a pretty long revue but if you read it you will become a much better animator. (hopefully)
Last edited by Coyote Creek Films (September 26, 2011 (04:23am))