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Re: DEATH ZONE (15fps)

It was all right. The animation was rough and choppy in some spots. The quality wasn't too great either. It was blurry and distorted in some spots.

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Re: DEATH ZONE (15fps)

Thanks for the response! yeah Im going to keep working on animation.
So are you saying I need a better camera?

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I don't think its your camera...

the story was verrrry confusing.

and you shouldn't put the minifigures on stud less ground if you aren't going to even try to make them move.

usily I don't like it when people put those fancy explosions in their Brickfilms because it usily looks so unreal
you did a pretty good job with it though

The animation was a bit choppy but everything went by so fast that I couldn't tell when that was happening (not necessarily a good thing)

a final thing I would like to say is that you had some bad music transitions. that may just be the music you had chosen.

overall pretty good: 3/5

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What is it than?
Yeah I realized that, I am going to make a new one that is a team death match. And yeah I did an okay job but I could have done better.
Thanks for the response it was all very good advice. mini/yes

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It was great 3/5........................... mini/cat

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Re: DEATH ZONE (15fps)

Thanks! but I plan on making a better one mini/mrgreen