Stop Giving people crappy reviews.

Ok, I know you're an amateur, but you should've taken more time scripting, and actually animating. There were so many set bumps it was distracting. Fix this by taping, or blue taccing your set to the table. Also, actually make a set, instead of just having a baseplate. The voices were practically the same, and the focus was really messed up. Did you use a lamp? There was a lot of light flicker, and the movements of the arms in the background were annoying. For the animation, it was at a good frame rate, but it didn't go smooth enough. Take your time animating, using smaller movements. Also, the credits at the end made up for 20 seconds of the movie. NEVER do that unless it's like a minute. For a self made movie, all you really need to say is the music. For example, when you said "Sets: None" That was pointless.

So, what I'm trying to say is, TAKE YOUR TIME! Please, buy a lamp. Also, TAKE YOUR TIME!