Very well done!
The special aspect ratio with your Youtube name in the black bar really helped give off a professional atmosphere.
You have really, really improved in the short time that I've been watching your films. Keep up the good work.
Most of the animation is over by the twenty second mark, but because of the tone set, and the style used, it's not so much a problem as it is a different style of short.

There are hardly any flaws in this, and those few are barely anything more than nitpicks.
At 0:13, the car begins to stop, speeds up briefly, and then stops. It should probably just slow down and stop, but since the motion is still very smooth and well done, it's not a big deal.

There is an obvious break between papers at the 0:15 mark, but again, not a huge problem.
And this is the most nit-picky remark, but I don't care for the smiley face at 0:32. There's nothing wrong with it, I just don't like the sight of such a simple, retro face attached to a more modern and detailed body.

There are a few other silent shorts out there that are a bit more deep and thought-provoking, but it's nice to have one that's more light and fluffy every once in a while.
Nice job.
4/5

This was really nice! Like Mighty Wanderer, there isn't much I can say about this film that Pritchard didn't cover, except for a few very persnickety things:

The lighting: I know that it was supposed to be set during the dusk/evening, so that's why it was so dark, but it just turned out a tad bit odd-looking. Try having one bright source of light (representing the moon/sun) and a couple other lights that are dimmer or further away from your set than your key light.

The sunset: The sun effect was really, really nice. I loved the different shades of orange and yellow it had. However, the sky was just pitch black. If you ever look at the sky during a sunset, there's still some color left in it even after the sun goes down past the horizon.

Again, these are really nit-picky comments and the things I've mentioned don't detract from the film at all, but I felt that I should give some sort of feedback instead of just saying "Great job!" Even so, you really did a great job on this. I hope to see some more films from you in the future!

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Epic cinematography much? It was such an eye candy! Thank you, ZymonCone! I wish there were more animations in the second half of the film though.