Topic: 2 shorts

This is NOT easter films! I repeat; NOT easter films!

I've made two shorts which are really kind of fighting animation tests...

The Fight

Sword Fight

Please give your opinion and tell me what to improve mini/smile


-Antifaan

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Re: 2 shorts

Not bad, not bad at all. mini/tongue The first one could've done without the beeps, they were getting annoying. When the guy with the hat started to attack the other guy, I think the other guy already started to fall down before the guy with the hat hit him, but maybe youtube just messeds up the animation.
The sword fight was great. mini/smile

Re: 2 shorts

I liked sword better cause it was SWEEt as candy.

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Re: 2 shorts

I prefer the sword one but I wasn't really a big fan of the sound effects. For me they just didn't fit. mini/blankexpression
The end of the fight test was good though.

Re: 2 shorts

I liked them both. The fighting on the sword one was nicely animated.

[offtopic]I found this in the related videos. Although it sucks, this is the first brickfilm I've seen with Hebrew. Its pretty uncommon. I can translate the titles if anyone wants[/offtopic]

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"actuallly this involves spiderman too, not batman. but im also taking a new approach, more comedy, less action. i dont see to many movies like that with more comedy than action" --SteveStarfyTV on an Indiana Jones meets Star Wars idea.

Re: 2 shorts

Nice, but you need to work on overcoming the camera bumps and make the animation more smooth.

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