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Time for $ale
After a long workday a man discovers a shop, where boxes with the title "time" are being sold. He actually thinks its a fake, but nevertheless he buys one to give it to his girlfriend. She opens it and is happy to get some time from her boyfriend. The man now wonders, if this boxes really work.
Mod Note: Mild Language]
That was really good! The animation was pretty good, choppy in a couple spots, but overall good. The sets were good and the story was great. I really liked transition with the cup and the facial animation. Keep up the good work.
Die Produktion Werte in Ihrem Film waren sehr hoch. Es gab viel Aufmerksamkeit zum Detail. Ich würde erfreut sein, wenn Sie den Dialog auf englisch hier bekanntgaben, also weiß ich genau, was geschieht. Ich war interessiert, an aufzupassen, weil ich eine Geschichte scripting, die ich in den neunziger Jahren begriff, morgen genannt „Kauf“. Ich denke, daß es ein ähnliches Konzept ist: eine mensch kauft Zeit an einem Speicher. Der Plot ist, zwar viel unterschiedlich. Sie erledigten eine feine Arbeit, die diese Karikatur bildet.
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The production values in your film were very high. There was much attention to detail. I would be pleased if you posted the dialogue in English here, so I know exactly what is happening. I was interested in watching because I am scripting a story that I conceived in the 1990s, called "Buy Tomorrow". I think it's a similar concept: a person buys time at a store. The plot is much different, though. You did a fine job making this cartoon.
Holding, it had subtitles, but you have to turn them on by clicking the cc button.
The sets were the strongest part, though the writing was also pretty good. The animation was the weakest aspect however. Because it was a bit choppy most of the time. Overall this is a very good brickfilm that has convinced me to watch your other brickfilms.
8/10
Holding, it had subtitles, but you have to turn them on by clicking the cc button.
Okay. I d/l the movie and watched it so there were no markups. YouTube had a 60-second ad preceding it and I always download when I see these to avoid the ads.
The sets were the strongest part, though the writing was also pretty good. The animation was the weakest aspect however. Because it was a bit choppy most of the time. Overall this is a very good brickfilm that has convinced me to watch your other brickfilms.
8/10
Even though the animation is it's weakest point doesn't mean it's bad. This is the smoothest animation I've seen in a while. And even if it is a little choppy, it gets the story across extremely well!
Good job, sir! I truly enjoyed your video!
I didn't think it was very bad.
nltwm wrote:The sets were the strongest part, though the writing was also pretty good. The animation was the weakest aspect however. Because it was a bit choppy most of the time. Overall this is a very good brickfilm that has convinced me to watch your other brickfilms.
8/10
Even though the animation is it's weakest point doesn't mean it's bad. This is the smoothest animation I've seen in a while. And even if it is a little choppy, it gets the story across extremely well!
Good job, sir! I truly enjoyed your video!
I never said the animation was bad. I just said it was the weakest part.
Lavamation wrote:nltwm wrote:The animation was the weakest aspect however. Because it was a bit choppy most of the time.
Even though the animation is it's weakest point doesn't mean it's bad. This is the smoothest animation I've seen in a while. And even if it is a little choppy, it gets the story across extremely well!!
I never said the animation was bad. I just said it was the weakest part.
Thanks again 
I can see how that was meant. Well, I will try to make animation less choppy next time 
I'm very impressed by the quality of the writing and the pacing, not to mention some of the nicely-timed visual gags you included. While on the technical end there's nothing especially outstanding (though the facial animation is nicely effective), you show a great attention to detail (for example, I loved the bell on the door of the shop. It's a minor throwaway detail that gives a kind of liveliness to the setting).
Excellent job, a very enjoyable little short!
It's a creative idea with good visuals and voice acting, with a punchline that feels like something out of a fortune cookie. Also, the music at the beginning, along with the mouth animations, helps the story flow a lot like if you were watching a cartoon, let alone a brickfilm. Nice job!
This is absolutely great! Loved the concept, the sets and the cinematography.
Congrats for winning several awards at the "Steinerei" Festival! 
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