Topic: [THAC XII] Creepy Crook

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Creepy Crook

THAC Entry
Director's Cut
This is my THAC entry and Director's cut that includes a scene I had to cut due to it lacking the mod element, some extra sound effects, and some experimental color correction.

Last edited by Greenshirt (January 4, 2015 (07:13pm))

Re: [THAC XII] Creepy Crook

I am not sure if I understand the story. Is it

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The crook is put in jail, then he breaks out  and steals a diamond, then gets shot?

I think it's that first shot that throws be off. But other than that, the story was ok, and the ending was really creepy, but there was nothing really wrong with it. The sound effects could have used some work, but I understand the time constraints. Overall, it's good!

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Re: [THAC XII] Creepy Crook

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It was supposed to be him thinking about going to jail, and not wanting to, but it is a bit unclean.

Thanks for the comment as I agree that my sound design could use some work.

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Interesting idea, but the lighting is a bit weird at times. Nice job, though.

Have you seen a big-chinned boy?