Topic: [THAC XII] Detective Burgen: Missing the Bus

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Detective Burgen embarks on his mission to clean the slate with his new friend. I'd appreciate any input!

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Why is the YouTube video still unlisted? THE WORLD MUST SEE THE ADVENTURES OF DETECTIVE BURGEN!

As an English Gentleman myself, I approve of this immensely. The detectives character was suitably larger than life, and the 'friend' worked well as a straight-man. The animation, lighting, and set-design (I think you could've thrown in a building or two behind them) were basic - but it was for THAC, so I'm shutting up.

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Max Butcher wrote:

As an English Gentleman myself, I approve of this immensely.

I'm really glad you think so.  I was afraid my portrayal of the character might not have been quite on point and throw it off.

I thought this was a good use of the theme also.

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Max, haha forgot to put it on public mini/shifty  I am pleased you approved, as I am full blown Mexican. Really, squid really helped out with his character, (betwixt us, good heavens, etc) so he was very beneficial to his part. You can feel the rusty-ness, as I haven't animated once since the Celebration Contest.

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I liked the end. Twas unexpected and funny. mini/tongue

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The ending came quick and surprised me! Maybe it could've been edited a bit better in terms of pacing, but I still liked seeing it come out of nowhere. mini/smile

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considering it being a THAC film, the things that could be improved on are endless. I'm thankful for the response this has gotten!

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Not bad! The ending was unexpected (although, I expected it because I saw the script early), but overall it was good. Squid plays a great British man. The music could have been more comical in my opinion, but that's a very small gripe.

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I can agree with the critiques of others, but good job, on the whole.

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wow, this is the most comments i've gotten on one of my submissions mini/tongue thanx guys, you're the best!

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