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Detective Burgen: Missing the Bus
Detective Burgen embarks on his mission to clean the slate with his new friend. I'd appreciate any input!
Why is the YouTube video still unlisted? THE WORLD MUST SEE THE ADVENTURES OF DETECTIVE BURGEN!
As an English Gentleman myself, I approve of this immensely. The detectives character was suitably larger than life, and the 'friend' worked well as a straight-man. The animation, lighting, and set-design (I think you could've thrown in a building or two behind them) were basic - but it was for THAC, so I'm shutting up.
As an English Gentleman myself, I approve of this immensely.
I'm really glad you think so. I was afraid my portrayal of the character might not have been quite on point and throw it off.
I thought this was a good use of the theme also.
Jolly good show, Gentry.
Max, haha forgot to put it on public 
I am pleased you approved, as I am full blown Mexican. Really, squid really helped out with his character, (betwixt us, good heavens, etc) so he was very beneficial to his part. You can feel the rusty-ness, as I haven't animated once since the Celebration Contest.
I liked the end. Twas unexpected and funny. 
The ending came quick and surprised me! Maybe it could've been edited a bit better in terms of pacing, but I still liked seeing it come out of nowhere. 
considering it being a THAC film, the things that could be improved on are endless. I'm thankful for the response this has gotten!
Not bad! The ending was unexpected (although, I expected it because I saw the script early), but overall it was good. Squid plays a great British man. The music could have been more comical in my opinion, but that's a very small gripe.
I can agree with the critiques of others, but good job, on the whole.
wow, this is the most comments i've gotten on one of my submissions thanx guys, you're the best!
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