Topic: Critique My Frame!
This thread is a spiritual successor to the "Frame from your upcoming film" thread and is designed to focus on the productive and helpful critiquing of a work-in-progress shot or frame from your upcoming brickfilms. Post here if you want people to critique the cinematography, lighting, blocking and set design of a work in progress shot! Keep Smeagol's guide to commenting on a film in mind when writing critiques.
Guidelines:
Only post a frame that is a work in progress.
If you want to show off a finished frame, post it in soon-to-be-made "Show off a Frame!" thread.
Allow at least three comments between new frame posts.
If you are posting a frame, be sure to give feedback on the previous frame!
Let's get started!