Topic: The Outcast
The Outcast
The Outcast is the story about Tony, a shy high school kid who keeps getting bullied.
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The Outcast
The Outcast is the story about Tony, a shy high school kid who keeps getting bullied.
Nice work Carlos! I can tell your brickfilms are improving.
You had a clear story, and all of your characters were believable. I also liked how you used voice actors for your film.
I do recommend you increase your frames per second to get a smoother animation. You know what they say, practice makes perfect!
I think almost everyone has been bullied in some way or another at some point in their life, and this film gives the viewer that moment of justice that everyone wants from a bullying story.
It's funny that this thread was neglected for 4 months. As Nate said, you should up your frame rate. The picture/sound quality, although mostly good, wasn't entirely consistent, but all in all, you've done a pretty good job. Well done and keep animating 
-William
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