Topic: The Office Escape Part 1

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The Office Escape Part 1

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The dude has to get home on time. A sequel will be made.
Special thanks to Hazzat for getting lines in.

Last edited by MooCJ (June 21, 2009 (07:56pm))

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make a separate link: you tube or vimeo. the directory link is not effective until it's reviewed and approved.

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The image is the link.

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excellent ! mini/smile

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what image?!

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I removed the image for less confusion. I think the Youtube link is pretty clear. mini/tongue

Last edited by MooCJ (June 21, 2009 (08:38pm))

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You can just ASK me if you want a new song mini/lol mini/tongue

''You don't have to tell him how great is coffee is man!''

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That was pretty good.


Although I was hoping it would be about The Office.

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T.G-Tom wrote:

You can just ASK me if you want a new song mini/lol mini/tongue

I thought you were gonna be busy with STAR or something. *insert blushing emoticon*

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Nice film, liked the plot.
BTW- was that my walking footsteps sound effect? mini/wink

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Jon64 wrote:

Nice film, liked the plot.
BTW- was that my walking footsteps sound effect? mini/wink

-Jon64

Yes, it was I use it now. It's a very good sound effect. Nice job on it. mini/smile

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I thought the concept was great, but the editing needed to be a lot tighter, and some music while he was building would have been nice.

Your animation was great though, as well as the picture quality and the end part was funny.

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I luv the cube design and how itmakes the plates go on it's sides.

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I like the "Town-Design" which one can see behind the office-window.
Cool and nice way to sho a big town without CGI.
Only the lighting is not so well choosen.

The plot/story is interesting. And like "Fancypants" wrote before, there should be a cool kind of music when he build-up the flyer.
And I think the cinematography will be more interesting when you include more close-ups instead of always the wide-angle-view. An close-up when he put the coffe-cup onto the table, when he demontag the lamps etc...
And may be a shot from outside the window INTO the office when he crashed will be funny too.
You should think about an faster cutting..???

Anyway, its a cool, nice and entertaining movie which made me laughing,
I realy hope to see more from you.

8/10

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Really awesome, good animation. Great story. I liked it. Good job. mini/smile
BTW, What camera and FPS do you use?

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This film brings a whole new meaning to stealing office supplies!
I enjoyed, though I agreed with the reviewer that the computer video was unnecessary. Also, I would have liked to see coworker reactions, especially since you showed them all watching.
All in all, I enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to the sequel.
- Aaron

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Man, I missed a lot of reviews on this didn't I? Thanks for the feedback, guys, I appreciate it!
I totally agree with everyone who said editing had to be tighter. Especially a couple sound FX. mini/tongue
I really only used the video capture so much because I thought it was pretty shweet at the time, but now I realize the film could have done without the Googling part.