@Pritchard Studios
Glad you like the look, as far as the story I wasn't shooting for a super literal film, this may have hurt placements. But sometimes I like non-literal films as well as films that are more about mood and feeling rather than plot and structure.
We had a lot of trouble thinking up some starter ideas, but at the time I had a mood I was shooting for and I think we might have gotten close. this was the sort of mood we were shooting for I know some people like more literal stories but sometimes it's fun to make stuff that isn't. I feel like if I tell you what I think happened with the piece that would take away from viewers' own interpretations of what happened.
@Robukka
Glad you liked, sadly I don't have a lot of time these days to work on a longer film like this, we also borrowed a few thousand dollars of lights we don't regularly have access too (although I could light this if I only had to worry about one set at a time rather then two)
As far as the kids thing on YouTube I had set it as 'not intended for kids' as a mood-based film rather then some kind of narrative animation, just the nature of it seems less child-focused so it should be safe labeling as not intended for children.