Certainly not the worst of these I've seen. Masking was well done, though the physics of Dane's flight was a little weird. Comic timing was pretty good, and while I'm not sure whether your use of hackneyed sound effects was intentional or just laziness, they worked well for humorous effect. It loses something without the proper font, and you really need to build a set besides the same two-stud-high gray wall you use in every single film I've seen from you. But a nice addition to the series, all things told.